Monday, May 5, 2014

15th post

Today in P.E. we looked at the other band class's blogs. I looked through every single one and im really surprised at how great their blogs looked. They wrote at least 200 words, posted multiple pictures , and  even videos on their post. I can really see how much effort they put into their blogs. They even show us things that they do outside of school like, tekwondo, running, skateboarding, and even walking their dog. I now see that this is how a blog should look like and I now see that I must improve, but first I would like to say the things im doing right about my blog. First I would say that I do have lots of evidence of my work in pictures. Next, it would be that I have a good amount of post at the moment, but I know that I have to put out at least 25 post on my blog. Now, for what I need to improve on. I need to post more often with evidence, post things outside of school, and write more in every post I make from this moment on.

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